.::Aight Check It::.
its aight...your trying to switch it up too much....it was enjoying bassline....but the thing in the back was annoying..
Um...you coulda made it hot...like use that intro....but turn the bassline into a sick ass like bump bump bump bump (kinda fast) then have it be like (mid tempo) bump bump ...bump bump....than have chorus bump bump bump kinda fast
No idea if that helps I am no beat maker but thats how it registers in my head...
NIce for first time just keep up with ya shit
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