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Old 07-21-04, 08:29 PM   #10
ibraheem
Flyweight
 
Posts: 146
From: London
yo voting back

IP:

%$ WordMan

This Boy Dont Pro-Claim his Wins Cause he a chump
He got More of a Net-Loss Then Donald Trump
This Boy Dont Pro-Claim his Wins Cause he a chump
personal 5/10

He got More of a Net-Loss Then Donald Trump
Spritual Hand Of God, Ripping In this Rap Game
Causing Dipressing Stumps,
ok 4/10

Iam Eating this Kid Up faster then resses Pieces
Making Him Disspear in RB Faster the endangered Spieces
use of imagination but aint that good 5/10

His Name Soulless Speaks, Of NoN-Fellowness
Soul States A Man, So Less Means he a womenliness*
I Flating this Guys Pride, More the Permanent Press
personal 5/10

I suggest Taking ya Life write Now and Face-yah-Redress
Cause Like A Aids CAse-life-wont-Progress
best line nice ending 7/10

26/50
5.2/10
nice flow good use of personals punches aint that hard structures is ok need more imagination

Soulless

I throw quick-wit-verbs.. Just to kill-these-herbs,
your not good…..or even close to being sick-wit-words!!! (wordman…lol)
not bad give it 6/10

Ya only see verses-in-gospels.. NEWBIE so no personals-are-possible…is it??
So ill give u one tip listen!… battling soulless….equals-a-hospital-visit..
wack 3/10 didnt feel the flow or the first line at all

.im just fuckin….ur a kid… so snap~crackle then pop and watch I’l top-this-jock
Ha! The wordman.. couldn’t play my lines.. If my name was HOP-SCOTCH!!!
bad flow personal though 5/10

Just come hard…but..damn… ill still kill ya-words-man..
Cuz-I-can, tell your a fake white punk… covered in wrist-bands!!
hate the racism 4/10

you pretend!!! Cuz damn ur even atcha ’wits’-ends…
Dun worry… just create another alias…. And u can try-again…..
best punch liked it 6/10

24/50
4.8/10
the flow fucked you up had as much personals but punches wer weak except for the last one have to give it to wordman for having better flow
vote;wordman

with respect for both of you

hit my battles

peace