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Old 07-21-04, 10:41 PM   #10
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vote goes 2 percept shun bettah flow bettah punches overall

Punches: Percept shun
Flow: percept shun
structure: percept shun (energy i didnt like how u put da dots in da middle)
wordplay: percept shun


energy u gotta work on ur whole rap game na mean, i kno u got talent but u need 2 work on erything some mo iight na mean good shit 2 da bof of yall ~!i1i!~
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