when u key a verse
avoid the quotations it makes ur verse quite gay if we dont already get ur punches
avoid the // after ur lines
dont use ~
ur verse should look like this:

........................
..........................
.........................
.........................

not:
...
..........................
........
................
..
^^too uneven

everything should be equal.

it'll be easier to read and more enjoyable.

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