willnova
your verse was nice..but you had wack structure and your verse flowed much worse becuz of this
you had a nice view and story of this..and in the first part u put imagrey right in my head
u fell alittle of at the end with im agrey
overall 7.8/10

lethal lunatic
you had a truely nice peice you r structure was actually pretty tightness ..
your verse floweed much better than his u stayed on topic with good
imagrey thats why my vote goes to you..all around better peice
8.3/10