dis kat walking around her thinkin he hard but we all know he sweet//
he the type the when he go to school nigas be he fresh meat //
3/10. not following your flow, horrible opener.
the guy makes me laugh this must ba a comedian //
he like to have jag off contest when its just him and his friends //
2/10. rhyme?
but hey give him props at least he tries //
naw fuck dat cause when i battle ma oppenent always mad of cries //
3/10. lame.
come on battle me R U serious //
you must be delirious //
2/10. anyone seen a punch yet?
dude at least u tried but nigga u still to small //
me i fuck around and commit crimes scooby doo couldn't solve
6/10. clever, but how about a personal or a punch at least??
15/50.

OK, this next post is all stretched, I wanna state it here so I dont have to on each line. it kinda threw off ya flow a bit, you should shorten it up a bit.

Gorilla poundin you, beat in ya cheast, you feeble at best, anyone ever tell you this aint tha streets its tha net/
6/10. ok opener for this battle. a punch too.
My battle rounds like tha civil war, and you in tha red tights', if you thinkin you gon lose, you dead right/
5/10. again, a decent line for this battle.
Everyone loves lies but hate the truth, front-lines, im here gettin my 5, you here cuz thats where ya skill places you/
5/10. ok, but the flow is hard to follow.
Shut ya face, this a blunt beef, you dont buck heat, tha only buck you got standz as ya front teeth/
7/10. nice line. good punch. too bad it didnt have the flow for a 9.
Im beatin ya past dazed, you enlist in death, instead of Front Linez, go to the last forum in backstage cuz it fitz you best/
5/10. decent closer for this battle. soft punch.

28/50. more than enough for the win

vote: Kronuz

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136598

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