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Commentz: It Would Be Easier To Read And Plus You'd Prolly Get More Replys If You Quit Highlighting Your Shit, By The - - - Between Multis Or Rhymes And The Words In Capitols And Shit, It Doesnt Make Your Verse Any Better Than It Is With It In There... It Was Ok, Try Not To Be Repetitive And Have To Much Like Content...
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PRETTY soon ure BOY CASS, will be heavy- with- fame,CAUSE I steadily- bring,hot rhymes, THATS better than "VETERANS-IN-THE-GAME,these cats IS NOT-NICE,in the spot-light,they HEAVILY-LAME, the game is ready -FOR-A-CHANGE, hot -lines, i got-rhymes,TO BE embedded-in-ure-BRAIN
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.... (Bold And Underlined Are The Repetitives...)
Try To Work On That For Now..
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