..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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Ok NiCe Battle
GodSon-Structure as Fucked Yo verse Was Descent But Structure and Add More Punches...
Premanition-Good Structure lol..Punches Connected Personals Came And Nice Drop
Opener
Yo check it, battlin this cat? why waste my time i hope its just a lie...
..........No way in hell this Kid is gonna be The best vet of July ...
Okk 8/10
'God's son'....jesus! shud you be cursin wen religion is ya culture...
12 lines maximum...or one bar with that stretched structure....
9.3/10
Closer
Cause his bars-is-harmless although this "faggot" is sometimes-the-opposite//
..............This Fruit acts Rotten in hopes of having a Fungi(Fun Guy)-on-top-of-him//
Not Good Rhyme Scheme 7/10
Our mind state doesn’t compare in this lyrical affair….
cos my win was fair…while a no shows why you all square….
8/10
winner-Pre
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