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Old 07-22-04, 01:26 PM   #6
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Ok NiCe Battle


GodSon-Structure as Fucked Yo verse Was Descent But Structure and Add More Punches...

Premanition-Good Structure lol..Punches Connected Personals Came And Nice Drop

Opener

Yo check it, battlin this cat? why waste my time i hope its just a lie...
..........No way in hell this Kid is gonna be The best vet of July ...

Okk 8/10


'God's son'....jesus! shud you be cursin wen religion is ya culture...
12 lines maximum...or one bar with that stretched structure....

9.3/10

Closer

Cause his bars-is-harmless although this "faggot" is sometimes-the-opposite//
..............This Fruit acts Rotten in hopes of having a Fungi(Fun Guy)-on-top-of-him//

Not Good Rhyme Scheme 7/10

Our mind state doesn’t compare in this lyrical affair….
cos my win was fair…while a no shows why you all square….

8/10

winner-Pre
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