Deliquint
structure wasnt that great but you had hella wordplays and shit.your optical illusuin line,your hood and jacket,lol,good lines.your flow was kinda off at some points but it was some good spit.liked it a lot.

Optimal
Your verse was kinda,well wack.First off,you said you had to unload your clips.....not a diss.head over hills,backflips....um no.then you said they were gay,when he didnt say a word aboput men.but i liked the line about him having to explain what his lines are about so that makes em wack.the rest of your verse wack wacko.need to elevate in the wordplay area.

v/Deliquint

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