I liked all verses
Percept Shun: dawg... that... was... off... the... chain! very good man, the punches were "hard hitters" opening" good Middle: decent End: good your flow was also good wordplay and stucture were good your very good man
Energy: man... you need some elevating... yours is kinda weak but there was some good lines that turn things around..
my vote goes to Percept Shun
yo please vote on my battles man
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136736
once its done so i suggest you look at it at saturday