thanx Phenom-in-All, <hope i spelled that right, i notice that too with the first bar but i didn't want it to flow, i wanted the readers to feel like it was occurrin' in the present but not still happenin' so i left it as "hear me" but i know whut you meant..
thanx, y'all make me feel like writin' sumthin' else.. i wasn't gonna post this at first,
thanx ppl!
Mo' Feedback, I like this!
~wun~

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