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Old 07-22-04, 04:50 PM   #10
Wicked One
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WillNova- your topical verse was nice....i was feelin it you stayed on topic n shit...and overall you did farely nice...but your structure wasnt the greastest so you need to fix that up...and your flow was okay not the greastest also....so overall you did well in this tropical...
Lethal Lunatic- your topical verse was so much better i thought...i was feelin it too...you also stayed on topic...AND your structure wasnt bad it was really good and fixed up...so overall i liked your so much better...

v/Lethal Lunatic
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