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Old 07-22-04, 05:35 PM   #9
RapMisstress
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Ummm, well

Trooper: Some of that didn't make sense to me nor did it rhyme in some lines. I think it was the misspelling that had me a little lost. But anyway the were really no personals and the punches were a lil weak. Make sure u get ya spellin right i know u prolly be rushin but that kinda mess up the flow and the rhymin.


GEE:I "ripped" him with a "slug", like his white girlfriends pussy.
Bitch aint gotta girl, this fag deals with more pipes than a plumba,
more room in his "trunk" than in a H2 Humma

That line stood out a lil but the rest of it just went down hill, other than that line, the verse wasn't hard hitting.



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