aight les look at dis...both ya guyz structurez were ok, tha punchez I think Gee had quite more, i liked, I "ripped" him with a "slug", like his white girlfriends pussy.
Bitch aint gotta girl, this fag deals with more pipes than a plumba,
more room in his "trunk" than in a H2 Humma...
but like rapmistress said then it started goin down stream dawg, this no hatin.

Now Troopa had some interesting shit, Go blow for blow wit me and get ya Sniffer drippin like D Strawberry,
^I guezz that means blowin lines and be gettin a bloody nose? hopefully im gettin dis shit ha ha, but ya needs some spellin and grammar and shit dawg, maybe shortin tha linez jus a bit.

Total comes ta this,

Punchlines: Gee
Structure: Draw
Flow: Trooper
Multis: Draw
Metas: Trooper

'Sa I v/J_Trooper

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