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Old 07-22-04, 08:01 PM   #15
ibraheem
Flyweight
 
Posts: 146
From: London
analysis

IP:

J's verse:

A Gee......... im Tellin u betta watch the kid he got Handles
Tek'z.............. hit ya back from Long- Distances Like Randall
nice opening 6/10

Gunnin off Exclusivly Resultin In ya Face bein left in Shamblez
Fuck ya if ya Light Weight?...... Heavy Weight lifes full of Gamblez
didnt see the punch 4/10

Thrivein and Thurstin'n from No Stardom ni99a im tellin u im Thirsty
Go blow for blow wit me and get ya Sniffer drippin like D Strawberry
liked this 7/10

Suicidal Tendencies Infiltrate my Thinkin Cavities O so verry Fluently
U Tell me who the Truest Be cuz the Title of King Mc dont go 2 GEE!!
nice vocab there not much of a punch 6/10

Troopz rep believe us that we stay around Bannannas like Ms. Chickita
Look.. im jus applyin for TRAX jus applyin to Rap my single Fact is That
wack 3/10

i Dont need 2 come out Fat if what u Most In Defenetly Provide is Wack
2 Gee and to who eva Runs in ya Team i dont respect No Hot Bars Brauds
decent shit 6/10

Elevate if you call me ya Way No Longer a Newbie cuzz ya rank jus Dropped
shit 3/10

35/70
5/10
look ur shit is tyt i tell you i like your flow and all but the personals just killed it fucked the hole thing up great vocab i tell you if this was audio i will give 9/10 cause it will sound mad but it aint so u need more personals and harder punched and a bit more imagination

gee's verse:

J...I see ya bitch crew, that you "rep troo."
holdin up fingers, cuz you dont got cocks or lead to shoot.
ok nothing great weak personal 5/10

Wolverine?..I'm cyclops...makin heat, and leavin you dead,
thats why mah laser eyes empty gats and leave you "red".
not bad 5/10

His signature states this...this rookie thought he shook me,
I "ripped" him with a "slug", like his white girlfriends pussy.
nice liked it 7/10

Bitch aint gotta girl, this fag deals with more pipes than a plumba,
more room in his "trunk" than in a H2 Humma.
not bad 6/10

This bitch fucks with more jewish boys more than Adolf,
fagit customers askin if he wants a foursome...but I aint talkin about golf!
shit didnt feel it at all 2/10

So I leave it to the voters to say your shit's worse,
this "Trooper" couldnt rap "higher" if he lit a "J" when he wrote a verse.
personal not hard though 4/10

29/60
4.8

gee girl i like your imagination but seriously you need to aviod the sexual shit only thing you diss about it homosexuals and dicks other than that your shit is good you need a bit of work on the vocab harder punches try to make your hard punches related to personals cause you kinda seprate em like hard general punches and wack personals

i have to give my vote to J cause he had a better flow, althought he had less personals but he won it with harder punches close shit the diffrence was
0.16666666666666666666666666666666667 lol
vote; J trooper

with respect for both of you

hit up my battles with explained votes i will retern the favor like i just did to gee although she didnt get my vote when she voted for me we need to stay honest so this shit gets going

peace