I'ma have to give my vote up for forsaken. you didnt have a hard punch, not a great personal, but the wordplay was ok.
shellz-- I liked ya opener but the second line was stretched too much. coulda shortened it up for the kill, wordplay just ok, punch, ok, personal good.
vote: Forsaken
return da fava ya'll
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136555
thanks.