breaking this shit down like a mofo

schema:

youre too small to bring it spit some flame and get trampled
i'm still trying to figure out why you're named for a camper
shit opening 2/10

but i dont complain i give advice...for example
all you need to shine is a good sample
wack cant even be bother to explain why 3/10

so here's how i think you should go
take a line out of my shit and make it sound like its somethin you wrote
is it a story 2/10

build your verse around it and you're bound to sound dope
i won't say nothin and im sure that you won't...wait don't
no punch 1/10

cause i dont wanna be the reason that you got sad
people left reviews on your shit and youre all mad
is this a conversation on a chat room?? 1/10

"the first 15 bars were garbage but that other one's not bad"
so i guess youre better off thinking of something hot fast
best so far 4/10

rv...park yourself for this one and don't let it get too scary
cause i wrote this without a thesaurus or a rhyming dictionary
questioning abilty 4/10

or a beat or a notebook or even a second glance
and even so you dont stand a chance
shit finish 2/10

19/80
2.4/10

ok flow was ok structure is bad no personals had about one decent line thats about it no punches more of a story teller as i said sounded like a conversation on a chat room

RV

i guess this battle, i gotta take a lil lighthearted
cuz you challenging me proves to all that you're retarded
bad opening 2/10

this is me against you, hood taking a hillbilly
i feel like im going one on one with a fake ass TIMMAY!
what is this shit about 1/10

say u wanted one more battle before your ass went to sleep
but we kno you're just waiting for your porno MP3
this got me laughing like fuck MP3 porn lol what kind of perverted mind you got lol i give you 3/10

to finish up, so then you can get your self to sleep
cleaning up after busting to ur homosexual fantasies
no rhyme no shit 0/10

and don't try to comeback with anythin similar 2 mine
i'll shoot you more times than 50 got, leave your punk ass dying
no shit again 1/10

leave your mama crying for ya, then ill fuck her up too
do like you do to gay men and leave her sweating and screwed
shit shit 1/10

but when it all comes to an end, and i'm done battlin you
fact will be fact and ima still rhyme shit better than you
your best line so far 3/10

now i was about to smack you up again but it seems your already dead
so i leave you alone now and hit up your mama's bed
3/10 for this ending congrajulation it rhymed

14/80
2.25/10

flow is shit no rhyme on more than one line no punches except for the sexual stuff and lol on the MP3 porn no offence with the comment you need a lot of work to elevate

ok close shit and it deserve to be called shit i give it to schema for having better flow thats about it
vote:schema

with respect for both of you

hit my battles with an honest vote and i will return the favor

peace