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Old 07-22-04, 09:16 PM   #9
fluidmoon
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Alright weak battle:Keep Elevatin:
kizza:ur verse could have been better, u need to work on ya flow and structure, you were saying things in ya verse that didnt make sense and were off the topic of trying to battle your opponent, you used filler lines when u could have been using personals, wordplay, and u really had no strong punches there, need to come harder next time, this is not hate, just honest feedback.......1
goldenk, ur verse was better, you had stronger punches and better overall flow and structure than kizza, liked the twist in ur last line, nice, u dissed him in ur verse and this is what a battle is supposed to be,keep doin this and use more personals,this would polish ur skills.............
VOTE:GOLDEN SHELLZ
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