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Deliquint:you had the overall better verse here, ya shit had some word flips in it and you had stronger punches and flow, you also had the personals with his name.....
4Blood2Hound:you didnt come as hard as your opponent, should try to use personals and wordplay,just a suggestion, but ya flow was decent, as for structure you both kinda stretched, but its aaiight..........1
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eliquint