Thread: MLC Vs. Dv8
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Old 07-22-04, 09:37 PM   #7
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DV8verall, was ok verse, ya flow and structure were on point, and ya dropped ok punches, but not as strong as your opponent here.........try some personals
(V)id:ya flow was ok,but ya structure was kinda all over the place,and some of ya lines were stretched,BUT ya punches hit harder and you used some wordplay and the use of vocab was stronger..i liked the..first 2 bars best............................
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