Presyce, I liked what you did.. but it wasn't a battle verse. It was an open mic. So the only thing I had to look at was see if the other person made one punch, which they did.

So...
Golden Shellz:

"nigga act like jim jones he act like he hard
he look like lil kim before her motherfuckin boob job"

Weak. Really lame, but it was a punch. So you've already won at this point.

"hell burn a ligment thats such a hard word
but ill put ya life on pause, like turnin a sharp curve"

Again, weak. Not a punch, it's self glorification.

"u servin me dog, thatll neva happen
u got as much chance in winnin as bill gates has in rappin"

That was decent.

"im livin my life dog u noe how it goes
but hes not a pimp so why da hell he fuckin wit my ho"

Not good.

"wen i spit my freestyles i get like shaq
nah ima dominate i aint mean ima hack!?!"

You get like Shaq, as in you never make free throws? Hah, just kidding. It wasn't good, but again, better than nothing.

v/ golden shellz

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