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Old 07-23-04, 12:17 AM   #7
The Reaper
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Da Prodigy has my vote.

Lil-Trip, your lines were too long. I didn't like your structure. It had an alright flow for the most part, punches were good, but your structure killed you.

Da Prodigy, your structure was good, punches were good, I liked your wordplay, and a good flow.

V/ Da Prodigy
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