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Alias... Ya Know?
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Flow - KroNuz. Even though the structure looked like it was gonna be hard to read, it flowed well and actually had multies. The lines were also about the same length. Kizza had an alright flow too, but some lines were too short and uneven.
Next time turn this:
A Structured bruisen, trust my movements, you battle 5 timez a day dont you get enough of losein/
to this:
A Structured bruisen, trust my movements,
you battle 5 timez a day dont you get enough of losein
Punches - KroNuz. Hit harder.
Personals - None.
Wordplay & Metaphors - Kizza. Had more metaphors and complexity.
Originality - Kizza. Had more original concepts.
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If you haven't noticed KroNuz went below the line limit, so I should be giving this to Kizza. but....Overall. punches are what wins battles and KroNuz hit harder. so
V/KroNuz - harder punches.
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