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Old 07-23-04, 02:49 AM   #14
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ok this battle was weak. BOth need to elevate.

Del- you had a few punches but they were weak, Sum wordplay but not so great either. i liked how it flowed though. Best punch>>Ima Reck-You-Side To Side, Tech05 Gon Be Under-Soil<<< weak but it was the best one you had. No personals at all. Elevate by focusin on DISSING HIM WITH personals and good punches.

TECH- wow dude, i think ELEVATE says it all but ima break it down. you had too many cheesy lines...K Mart and POP TARTS??? come on. your lines were too damn short and they didnt flow AT ALL... BAD VERSE overall...yea...it was that bad...

V-TECH