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~Cursed With Illness~
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IP:
PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR
Me vs. THUGZY
T West - Until the end it kinda seemed off topic but your closer helped to pull it together. This was a well written verse and i give credit. Had nice structure...as it was easy to read......good flow also.....7/10
Shadow - You're verse was more on topic all tha way through than T's was which is what we're judging here so you get my vote......but some parts did seem like you were on a broader topic than just the gift of youth.....like the battle between young and old....but overall i feel you hit better than T........7.5/10
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