chose winners verse:

i dont usually battle noobs but ones about to get clapped
hadnt seen him till i peeped his 50 thousand posts on bitch slapped
-finally a personal....opener=7/10
you pretty confident for someone that flows as herb as you
but if youre so damn good then how come i aint heard of you
-decent punch, but played
you know dudes a 'i live in my moms basement' rapper
ill leave this string twisted up worse then a jacobs ladder
-not easily understood, use basic info....
always talkin bout guns...all he can do is basic rappin
aint got no heat but his boy the smiley face is packin
-true, lacked structure and wordplay...
youre all gangster in ya rhymes but you shouldnt try and bring that out
cause on the real i bet a cat could prolly bat this string around
-nice punch, good personal...wordplay and structure=good, needs vocab.
so warning...string is in the building...hes hazardous to real
herb you put me to sleep so ima call you chamomile
-not easily understood, use basic info....
your wacker then hell..and yo im talkin the place
cause id prolly get set on fire 'fore i copped this kids tape
-sounds too soft. look for more expanion on the meaning
this cat just talks about him...his gun his chain his blouse his town
take that shit to open mic...its like three houses down
-great comedy line, vote= best line of the battle
your in a battle now so get ya head down in the game
you couldnt even find a personal that clowned on my name
-true, he had no personals. "inner sway"
much as you try to hide it you still come across a yungun fam
everyone knows strings dont shoot...you aint no rubber band
-haha, good wordplay and nice structure to create a good personal...closure=8/10


explanations:

STRING had no personals, he just talked about gangs and street slang, had multis but nothing impressive.....

SCHEMA had great punches, nice flow, all around 7/10 (impressive) verse...


vote: schema

return the favor...battled the same person