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Old 07-23-04, 03:24 AM   #13
Magic5
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AutoMATIK™
structure is ok...ur lines were a little stretched though...flow was pretty good...u had tight multis...tight wordplay...not very many punches, only a few of them connected...no personals...

..:Mystic:..
you fed...thats wack right there....dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its newbish...structure is ok...ur lines were stretched as well...flow was pretty good...u didnt have very many multis...wordplay wasnt good...a few of ur punches connected...decent personal...

Overall
both had a decent structure...both had a pretty good flow...both had a few connecting punches...Mystic had more personals, but they didnt connect...AutoMATIK™ had better multis...as well as more, and better wordplay...so basing off of that...AutoMATIK™ gets my vote in a sem-close battle...

VOTE - AUTOMATICK