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atticus: wtf...the structure was out of place on that one..good topic though.....ur imagineryb was ok..nothing special......ur flow was soo off u might as well be a bum...umm ur vocab wasnt soo good..this was only a good verse from u..ive seen much much better..but i think u shuld stick to text battles....i wasnt really feelin this verse that much..and the structure killed it badly..

shadow: WATTTT..this verse was sickkkkkkk.........i was feelin the flow the flow was off the hook..good imaginary i culd picture it perfectly....and ur ending and the message in this story was sick too..............good structure and flow....sick vocab..this was a real good topical..i was feelin this alot

vote: shadow

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