I personally think GEE hit harder.

Gee had better punches, better structure, better opener, and better closer.

Wordman, your structure did jump all over the place even without the bold codes. It ranged from 18-11. I couldn't really flow with it. You had some good punches, but not as good as Gee's. I liked your rhymes better though.

V/ GEE

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