thugzy:you had good structure,ok vocab,your punches were hit n miss but thats ok,your opener did'nt ryme though,that was kinda bad,your closer was ok,good idea..
murder gram
k verse but your structure was stretched then shortened which screwed up your flow,both your punches were bout the same,i did'nt see any good personals but overall decent battle..
VOTE/THUGZY