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Old 07-23-04, 03:47 PM   #28
fluidmoon
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ok, heres how i see this shit:
you both had good flow and structure in your verses,
wordman: your opener was good and you had some decent punches, but no personals really or wordplay to work off of, overall your verse was ok tho....
soulless:you had the overall better verse here because you had creativity in your verse, and used good wordplay, i think your punches also came stronger........overall good job....
VOTE:SOULLESS
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