Weak, weak, weak.

Punches: weak, but 2h2l
personals: weak, again 2h2l
metas: neither
multis: neither
structure/flow: rush

overall: 2h2l


That battle was weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaak. Seriously, elevate. Read other battles and see what really good battlers do, and then use your own concepts. Just write, and write, and write until you get better.

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I'll wait for you there
where the sun doesn't shine
Wait for you there
where the shadows run from themselves