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Old 07-23-04, 04:21 PM   #7
fluidmoon
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tek~your punches were ok, nothin special, and you didnt use any personals either, ya flow was alright,but structure kinda threw it off, overall, i just dont think you came hard at your opponent..
Auto:you had good flow and structure, ya punches were dope here, they really landed, you had nice multies also,liked your opener and closing bars.....good verse..
VOTE:AUTO
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