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Old 07-23-04, 05:28 PM   #4
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First Golden Dont Feed Off A Verse Its Kinda Weak...

Dont Put What You Mean At The End Of A Line Do It After You Finish Your Verse It Messes Up Yo Strcture

U aint ready 4 wen k to da o and tha O AND L’S/ (it spells kool)
i'm gonna do tha first half of my name 2 u, GOLDEN SHELLZ

Waste Of A First Line Go At Your Opponent That Whole Time Why Spell Your Name And Waste A Line

Golden Shells You had personals But No Punces

but fuck it, im gonna give this NEWBIE A CHANCE/
even tho this bitch iz mo fake than BOOBY IMPLANTS

Wasted 1st Line Couldve Done

Rap Game?Vanillia Ice A Even ay You Have No Chance...
even tho this bitch iz mo fake than BOOBY IMPLANTS....

Not The Best But Couldve Done Suttin Creative ^^

Winner-Kool Because Golden Fed Off His Verse And That Was Played
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