Tekken:

Your wack son...like a wack job...your just Stroking for WORK.....
Till i stick C4 in ya verse to give ya PUNCHES a Step up and Burst~/~

Wrappin like DEATH i stick MATIK with Gats quick till smothered in Plastic....
its drastic How i SAVAGLY CUT YOU DOWN and leave this kid SEMI autoMatik~/~
merkin this FAgQuick....i leave more shells then Low tide at Beaches....
This kid couldn't Draw blood...even though you SUCK worse then Leaches~/~
I ignite the INFERNAl and blaze this kid with Lighting Punches....
Your gettin served in the GRILL like Applebees handing Out Free LUNCHES~/~
So come WIT it....fuck it i JUST stole ya Luck like i rip ya Clover.....
Your not Predicted to WIN this like METEOROLOGIST IN CASKITS TURNE OVER~/~

ones and g'luck
- nice opener, good punches..great personals and good structure...




AutoMATIK:

Ur Sick? Ha..No..I Check Jokes..Have You 'Acceptin Ya End' Like "Convicts On Death-Row"/
..Yes..Yo I Supress Flows..Make Ya 'Lines In Tha Thread Disappear' Quicker Than "Pressed Clothes"!!../
I Got Close Aim Dude..Ya Reign Is Through..My Spits Dissin' This 'Square' like I "Flow-Angles"../
My Blows Taint You..Have ya Body On The Ground..'Surrounded By More White'..Then Kids Doin "Snow-Angels"..!!/
..Like I Said..Punches?..Ya Whack With Them..Fuck Ya Personals..They Like 'Harmless Criticism'..They Cant "Bothe-Me"...!/
Cuz Im Gunna Have My 'Punches Pickin At Ya Brain'..When I 'Shove My Hands Up Ya Nose' Like A Fuckin "Labotomy"..!!/

aight opener, great punches...good personals, decent structure, and a great closure.


hard to choose, but auto had a great closure.

vote: auto

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