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Old 07-23-04, 05:43 PM   #12
fluidmoon
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daillest1:ya verse wasnt that great but was ok,structure and flow were good tho,ya punches should have been harder and stronger,next time include some better wordplay and personals.......keep at it tho..1
Plague:you had good flow and structure also, i think you had the stronger verse here, your punches really connected and you came stronger than your opponent,i liked ya opener too, a personal that came hard........good job
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