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i'm gonna have to go with gilla on this, you had better flow and structure and your punches hit harder than your opponents did, i liked your opening and closing bars, they were solid,but you should relax a bit on the mom and gurl punches, they kinda played....
k-amazin: you had some good punches here but ya flow and structure were off a bit,lines kinda stretched like you were trying to fit a lot of words into a small space, try some new vocab techniques, so your able to do that.................good job both
VOTE:gilla

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