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Old 07-23-04, 08:56 PM   #18
fluidmoon
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YO,
ice:you took this by a landslide, ya whole verse was tight, you had flow, structure, personals, wordplay, basically all the ingredients for a good verse, u ate him,ya punches were on point and your usage of words was creative from start to finish...
lyrical:you had a decent verse but it wasnt strong enough of a match for ice's verse, you need to come harder and use personal disses, watch your vocab too, cuz it kinda seemed like you just threw a verse together and hope dfor the best.........decent overall though
VOTE:ICE PICK
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