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Old 07-23-04, 09:01 PM   #7
fluidmoon
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ok:decent battle:
plague:you had the better verse here,you had better flow and structure, your punches hit harder and you had good opening and closing lines, which means you came hard and followed thru till the end......good
black dragon:you had the weaker verse here due to the punchlines you came with, you had no personals and ya lines were kinda stretched which messes with the flow,
but not bad, just constructive criticism....
VOTElague
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