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timeless, you had the overall better verse here, you had good flow and structure, ya punches hit hard and you had some creative vocabulary in ya verse,good job....
trooper:your structure was good,but ya lines is stretched a bit, but you had a decent verse, i just dont think vocab wise you were better than your opponent, you need to come harder, and maybe use some personals in there as well...
VOTE:timeless

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