Timeless: opener, was good, u had some alright punches, nuttin amazin...u had good flow throughout ur verse, and good structure..no personals...ok verse
6/10....

J: Ugly ass structure, do sumthin about that...u also had weak punches, ur lines were stretched, not good doggy.......
4/10...
v/timeless for an all around better verse..

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