J: ya lines were stretched but you had betta vocab so fix ya structure..
T: betta structure nice verse overall...

This was close but even though J's structure was kinda off, J had sum punches and was just swingin' like a mug... I didn't catch metaphors from either.. This was REALLY close but the opener of one person's caught my eyes..

my vote/ J Trooper..

not bad y'all keep workin' at this.. and check the link in my sig... LK diss aight,
~WUN~

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