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Old 07-24-04, 04:13 AM   #11
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Marv J takes it easy with a better structure and harder punches. Monsoons verse was alright. That closure was pretty tite. But Marv just had you in everything else. Whether it was punches or metas, he had you. All of Marvs lines were hittin hard. Monsoon-fix ur structure a bit and it might flow better. At points I got lost and didnt understand some lines. Good battle, but MarvJ gets tha vote.

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