aiight gram had a weak opener, yoyo line was good. punch after that was good, closer was ok.. not many personals in the verse, needa work on that.. but it wasnt bad.

amayze, your opener was an alrite punch...2nd one used a bitta word play which was ok. overall there was a few decent punches n personals.. closer was a bit weak..

gram had a better verse second time round, it was some alrite shit.. nuthin amazin, but it was better then the first, punches all hit decent..

2nd verse from amayze was aiight.. punches worked, i understood what he was sayin.

im gonna give the vote 2 amayze, kid just came a bit harder then gram, more personals.. u both use // at the end of ya lines which is a bit pointless.. but fuck it..

peace.

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