lol~at riff raff~~givin dem a hard time lol~~~your structure is kind of fucked tho~~do it like this

blah blah blah blah blah blah blah cat/
blah blah blah blah blah blah blah hat/

not actually like that wit dem rhymes cuz if u do ima have 2 fuck u up 4 bein that dumb~~but u SHOULD get the point~~dont do a verse in a paragraph ur eyez get lost and u dont b concentratin on da lyrics u just b concentration on what fuckin line your on~~if you can fix that then try out here

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...343#post1433343

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