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Old 07-24-04, 06:51 AM   #19
Jacko
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Pretty clear who won..

Time- good strong verse, had hard hittin
punches, a nice rhyme scheme...
i see you used some personals which
hit hard and you worded them all very
well...flow was on point throughout
aswell and structure was good

J - verse wasnt bad, some good wordplay
used in the verse, but the punches just lacked
they werent really hard hitting likes times were
flow was ok, some lines were strecthed


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