aiight.....monsoon very gud spit 4 a newb...very gud wordplay...
nice structure..i liked your verse..jus maybe wasnt that hard in punches
marv-basically u had harder punches,gud multies
and a nice flow......

vote-marv

2 gud verses but marv had beta punches..tite battle

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