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I kill kids like you for a living, i slightly gone mad r-kelly
Let's face it... MY on-net career's lookin up...
....and yours is lookin up to me

Decent Punch..good to open up the verse 6/10

I smash you like mirrors with J's face cast
your like a window in my rectum...
coz you a Payne(pain) in my ass

Wordplay was nice..pity some ov the herbs on dis site dont understand it..punch was ok 7/10

But I'm dropping you boy, like childs game of hot potato
Cuz the dopest thing you ever formed...
...came outta a can of Play-Doh.

mmm..wasnt feeling this so much..still ok though 6/10

your not religious? but you should now pray to jehova
coz this panzie didnt have a chance tho...
...like sunday mornings with the mower!!!

Decent Worplay again..punch connected well 7/10

Didnt wanna check for 12 lines? even more lines for his diss
J your like armless kids at birthdays...
...you will never carry a gift!!

Lol..decent punch..still could ov been put across better 6/10

Another mcee flattened as i quickly fly-by
this battle is like rugby matchs won by kicks...
...because i didnt even try!!!

Ok wordplay..not as dope as the others though

was a pretty decent verse..worplay was decent.so was a flow and structure..a few punches could ov connected better sumtimes though

IP: D135 D6AF

They all ready pre-warned you that im deadly like one of a Twisted Televangalist
Ya Heart.. is gettin Dissolved from Bars.. that resemble... ones from a Mechanic

Flow was well of here..spoilt the punch big time 4/10

Call me Arragent but my Perception is that neva have i witnessed any Competition
Deadly Lyrical Ambushes touched Front lines.. Newbie of the year.. my Nomination

Not really attacking time less..almost taking the piss outta ur self 4/10

Look Timeless my rhyme is "This" that your Bitchless Murder Graphical Scriptures
Vividly Paint my Pictures.10-0 "no mo"mr Time u will never Experience the Gifted

Wtf..really tempted to stop even reading this..weak punch 3/10

Please ya Verses you spittin to me come back.... with more holes than Swisscheese
Witness how carefully "Silence Timeless" not Tanya Hardin but i will take off ya Knees

flow off a bit again...ok punch though nout special..5/10

Logically u will "C'. thats its Impossible for Me 2 lose Squables especially since im Tellin
Pussy Aroma from every bar Time has sent me ive been through more bars than a Felon

naaa..not really attacking again no good 3/10

Neva get the Second Chance to Take the Upper Hand from the rhymes im Deliverin
Strictly Pride Tested Notice the Signature Basically like a seizure i will leave u Shiverin

nope..not really a punch at all again..weak..u need to attack timeless..i dont see that at all

u went wrong in many ways..flow was off quite a bit..punches werent even attacking time..u seemed to be using the online dictionary too much..key to a battle is the throw punches and personals not rhyme about urself..did any who voted 4 j actually understand times word play..guess not..herbs!

v.timeless