Spinn your structure was aight and your verse was simple but got the point across remember sometimes simple is sweet, your vocab needs upped fah sho but that comes with time, aight vese.

Hattrick you came on point i liked your verse cause of the complexity of your vocab killah mane fah sho and you had good flow an all around good verse not much negative could've hit the personals bettah...

Both stay up Vote Hattrick

Spinn eh i answered you bitchslap you wanna go 8-12 lines pm me i'll set it up...

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