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Old 07-24-04, 11:45 AM   #19
KroNuz
 
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lol... ok...

BreakDown

Knox-Sioz-You used a "cum" line twice.... anyway your verse was ok, punches were there but didnt hit very hard, structure was ok, but yet agian, - - - doesnt make a multi n doesnt make it rhyme better... Flow was ok, originality wasnt there, and metaz no..... Overal Ok Verse....

!Riff Raff!- Your Punches hit harder, and where more original thats Knok'z, Structure Was Good, And Flow Decent To Lead To a Punch... No Metaz Or Multis, Wordplay as Alright..... But Overal Good Verse

BreakDown II
Punches- Riff
Personals- Not Many So Niether
Flow- Tie
Wordplay- Riff
Structure-Riff
Metaz- Niether
Multis- Knok
Originality- Tie

Final Vote------ !RiffRaff!
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